Good job tying all readings to the importance of location. However, I do feel like there is a lot more that can be expanded on, one example being what communities are created in these locations, and what factors may create ‘home-spaces?’ Not only can you explain the physical objects in spaces that influence atmosphere and experience, but also the non-tangible ones like memory and nostalgia. What was successful in each location? What was unsuccessful? What can this show about home-making spaces?
Adding some color could help distinguish and categorize these thoughts, and scanning the paper document to help the text read more clearly for the viewer.
Good job tying all readings to the importance of location. However, I do feel like there is a lot more that can be expanded on, one example being what communities are created in these locations, and what factors may create ‘home-spaces?’ Not only can you explain the physical objects in spaces that influence atmosphere and experience, but also the non-tangible ones like memory and nostalgia. What was successful in each location? What was unsuccessful? What can this show about home-making spaces?
Adding some color could help distinguish and categorize these thoughts, and scanning the paper document to help the text read more clearly for the viewer.