Going into the critique I did not feel that my piece was strong and I was not happy with the object that I was presenting. Although I was not proud of my object I felt I had a solid concept of glasses with different colored lenses to change your focus. Going into the critique I was not sure what to expect.
Some of the post it notes I received:
“I like the different shapes but the quality of the wire could be better.”
“Fun truism suggests (w/ glasses) choosing our POV.”
“Heart Eyes Emoji, Cellophane helps add meaning to the ‘prize’, the piece is a little hard to manipulate”
During the actual critique some of the revision types that I was given that I plan to attempt:
The lenses need to move better, to make it easier to change them, The lettering on the Truisms needs to be done cleaner possibly with more layering to better allude to the glasses, Overall cleaner look.
