In my editing I tried to focus on action continuity for the scenes towards the end. As she is running from the house I cut the clips when she’s turning the camera towards the direction she’s running. I also cut when the creepy man lunges at her to increase the tension for the viewer. I focused on appearance continuity as the short is supposed to take place the same day, within about a six hour span of time, and all outdoors. I only shot on sunny days, around the same time in the late afternoon/early evening so it would be believable that she was heading out to the bar for the night.

I’m planning on adding a lot more audio at the end of the short for the final cut. I’m going to mix in some scary sounds coming from the house, and as she is looking for her keys the sounds will get gradually louder and louder. I’m not very happy with the shot of the creepy man with his arms outstretched at the moment, but I’m planning on adding distorted sound and visuals to keep with the distortion motif I established in the daytime shots. I’m also going to record some sounds of me crying/screaming so it sounds like she is in the house on the other side of the hole at the end of the short.