Your studio project while clean-cut and polished was too safe. Your real self was sophisticated in terms of the idea you wanted to convey but lacked the power in terms of presentation to really push those ideas across. All that you really created was a grid of photos. It would have been better if the photos weren’t aligned and more scattered. In terms of you digital self, the presentation was good, and the overall piece was much stronger than you real self piece. All in all, I would have liked to see you go more out of the box.