Jakob and Sadie Rose both told me that my topic was very interesting because it is something that people are sometimes scared to talk about so it was refreshing and interesting to learn and read about it. They both agreed on a lot of the revisions I need to make such as revising the organization and implementing more structure in my paper. They both thought it would be a good idea if I could add statistical information on white supremacist shootings and comparing that to terrorist shootings in the USA and show the contrast. That was something I had not thought about including in my paper.
I really enjoyed reading both Sadie and Jakob’s papers. They both did a good job at making their papers interesting, at citing their sources, maintaining good organization of their papers and sustaining their argument throughout their paper. I think it will be really fun to see how Jakob will complete his final project for studio because the 3-d box he created for Bridge 3 was very impressive. For Sadie, she talked about for her final project in studio she is doing small paintings to represent the sexism in Hollywood. I really like her artistic approach .
