Love Wins…
Book Cover
Book opened
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Classmates Critique
Really nice how the story and the captions go well together. Really tight + clean connections between pages. (Jumana)
Black and white images look very nice paired with the captions. The story is great and I love how the placement of the text is different on each page. (Autumn)
The captions go well with the images, narrative feels personal yet universal. (Finn)
Great presentation. The pics link with the descriptions well and the format keeps it interesting. Good story. But the pages need to be flat (Thomas)
I really adored the layout of the photos + text. I genuinely wanted to continue reading and observing the images. The only downside that can be improved on is making the pages more straight cause it’s kinda like a wave right now. (Kristina)
I really liked the format of the whole book and the pages were all really neat. The narrative was also really inspiring. (Agnes)
This is so cute. (Amal)
My Response
I really appreciated reading all of my classmates critiques, mostly all of them were very positive towards the design and layout of the book, and the downs were regarding the neatness of the pages, which was due because I didn’t know how to glue them correctly. But over all I was very pleased with the feedback.
