After receiving feedback from Lily, I did the following modifications to the video:
- Scenes: Made them all equal in length, approximately 30 seconds. Each introduced with a title and a playful music. I am still not sure about the use of music. I noticed a gap in the titles with the absence of sound, this is why I decided to add it. Also, I thought that its use could emphasize the irony I want to convey.
- Audio: Faded in and out the sounds at the start and the end of each respectively.
- Stable: Introduced the horse hooves after 10 seconds.
- Abattoir: Reduced it to 30 seconds. Cut the images with the loud sounds, making the shock of the scene more explicit.
- Credits: Added the credits at the end. Like in the titles, I tried to adopt JL Godard’s style.
- Video Vignettes: Made them dynamic. In a scene of 2+ videos I introduced each every 10 seconds
Snapshot of the sound editing process
Below is the second draft of my video:
