This semester, I explored James Wright’s poem “Lying In A Hammock At William Duffy’s Farm In Pine Island, Minnesota”. Through this exploration of meaning and language in the poet’s work, I came about creating a garment to reflect its qualities and the impact it made on me.
To start off, this is my poem:
Lying In A Hammock At William Duffy’s Farm In Pine Island, Minnesota
Over my head, I see the bronze butterfly,
Asleep on the black trunk,
Blowing like a leaf in green shadow.
Down the ravine behind the empty house,
The cowbells follow one another
Into the distances of the afternoon.
To my right,
In a field of sunlight between two pines,
The droppings of last year’s horses
Blaze up into golden stones.
I lean back, as the evening darkens and comes on.
A chicken hawk floats over, looking for home.
I have wasted my life.
My Interpretation through a Wearable Garment:
Explanation:
Direct Quotes
“to my right” – Just a line from the poem, but also the direction towards which the veil is tilted
“over my head” – mask/veil – The idea of the mind as defining on how we see things and how we react to them.
“blowing like a leaf in green shadow” // “black trunk” – Black and green as defining colors in both pastoral imagery. Incorporating leaves as the reference to nature in the garment.
“golden stones” // “cowbells” // “bronze butterfly” – The reason behind choosing the wire material.
“i have wasted my life” – The line that ties up the poem together, and what ties up my garment together – the “ombre” idea of time.
Scholarly Sources – JAMES WRIGHT “A Blessing”
Suddenly I realize
That if I stepped out of my body I would break
Into blossom.
The idea of blossom and waste coming together.
Defining of Terms
Sonnet: a poem of fourteen lines using any of a number of formal rhyme schemes — a feeling of incomplete-ness — the poem is only 13 lines.
I incorporated this using the exposed wire.
Tie In’s:
Language: Pastoral, straight forward
Form: Incomplete Sonnet
Point of View: From the narrator/poet’s POV
Material: Wire and Leaves – transparency and nature and ombre for waste
Color: Waste, green, etc
Sound: Shuffling leaves – therapeutic white noise but also WASTE
break this down a bit more as you did in the presentation–
great! might add some bold headings to make easier to read – but content is right on track!
The formatting didn’t go through! Re-uploaded and corrected 🙂