For my original storyboard, I had the same concept in mind of comparing the weather in New York to the weather in SF. I was going to have some of my pictures from my perspective so that it would be like looking through my eyes and my view. The other pictures would then be from someone else’s perspective looking at me. The problem with that was I don’t think you would get a good sense of “touch” by looking from someone else’s view so I decided that all the image would be from my perspective instead. This way I wouldn’t need to rely so much on someone else having to take the pictures. Another change that I made from the original was including more pictures and having a more detailed ending. In my original storyboard, I made the main point be the part about the water from the air conditioning units falling on my arm but in my new storyboard, that is only a part of it. Overall the old storyboard was just too simple and didn’t have enough content making the narrative very short.
