Hey Everybody! So this time around, I decided to revamp the miniature garbage bag I created in the previous post, based off of the tips I was given during the critique from my peers. I was asked to specifically, make the trash bag somewhat transparent so that people could tell what is inside them, and in addition I was told that I should scale up the size of the bag. In the attachment below, I have posted photographs of my previous object and the updated one; as well as notes I was given from one of my peers from the critique for comparison purposes. The new bag was made with a sheer gray material and plastic wrap panels so that people could see what is actually in the bag. The fabric panels have my dreams and/or memories drawn in black india ink on them, it is gathered together at the top and a strap is sewn in to resemble a trash bag. Stuffed inside the bag are my dreams and/or memories in written form on paper, that have been shredded apart and crumpled into smaller pieces to resemble waste I no longer need in my life.
