First Research Presentation-1gezwlo
The feedback I received mostly revolved around the strength of last two topics, despite they were definitely still to broad.
What most of the class advised me to do was to merge the last two questions and create a greater, more specific one.
I will also need to work on the visual format of the topics in studio, as I believe they could have a greater potential and as I haven’t quite delved into them as much.
I am interested in all of the three topics, but I was hoping to develop the first one in larger terms.
However, I will make sure to explore the last two as much as possible and ultimately strengthen my final research question.
