| Bridge 3: Feedback |
Good things about my piece
- It is a representation of ‘cycle of life’.
- Ink is a good representation of the movement of cherry blossom falling.
- The gestural movement is interesting, and metaphoric.
Some elements that I can work on to improve my piece
- Paint brush on the end has different meaning than what I want to address
- Far shots with myself are disturbing the metaphoric theme. Make it closer will be more abstract.
- The far shot also can be slower.
- Glitter is confusing in the beginning of the piece. Having closer and slower shots will be better. (Looks like salt, or sugar in the beginning)
