Please retake the photos.
Natural light is good, but not as a background light.
It overexposes the images, making them difficult to read.
Anyway, I think you did pretty good work on your bailing shoe assignment. I would of like to see more wire work especially on the soul of the shoe though, to add more visual weight to the object. The vegetation worked out well, communicating the “nature” of the product. Maybe adding more vegetation, to extend away from the shoe to give a sculptural effect.
Your info-graphic reads as unfinished, especially as related to your class partner’s interest, and it does not give many clues to your process.
Please retake the photos.
Natural light is good, but not as a background light.
It overexposes the images, making them difficult to read.
Anyway, I think you did pretty good work on your bailing shoe assignment. I would of like to see more wire work especially on the soul of the shoe though, to add more visual weight to the object. The vegetation worked out well, communicating the “nature” of the product. Maybe adding more vegetation, to extend away from the shoe to give a sculptural effect.
Your info-graphic reads as unfinished, especially as related to your class partner’s interest, and it does not give many clues to your process.