Comments:

1. Try working larger. It’ll make the impact of your personal dreams and memories more effective.
2. Newspaper background is kind of random.
3. The newspaper background works better than a plain cardboard background.
4. The notes are very organized, and the college itself is sort of messy (but in a good way).
5. 3-D aspect is interesting. The push-pins, different levels, and
6. Work more with the paintings in the cigarette boxes. It could be an interesting project.
7. Work well with paints.
8. Repetition of square-shape is nice.
9. The butterfly line dangling free at the bottom of the collage is interesting.