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- Jocelyn 1
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- Jocelyn 2
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- Jocelyn 3
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- Class Critique
The text highlighted in Green are the positives, and the Pink are negatives.
From all the feedback and suggestions I received, I came to realize how important the narrative is to express my unseen site, ‘Pressure’. Based on the suggestions,I intend on creating more pieces, making it a series. In the process of creating more pieces, I plan on illustrating a variety of characters further exploring into my site.
