In brainstorming this, I incorporated many different themes, including my seed syllables, swan image, and the colors I wanted to use. I used the critique I got to make a finished final product incorporating ideas from the drafts.
The final draft looks very similar to the digital first draft. This is because the critique I got on that mandala was very positive. I incorporated the swan at the bottom in a way I thought was cohesive, simple, and fit the balance of my mandala.