TRUTH Elvia: There are a lot of things I like about this! I appreciate the location with the soft backlighting; it feels very natural and it lends itself to feeling “genuine”. I can tell you put a lot of effort into your location and camera angle. The transitions are very smooth. Your editing does not feel choppy or forced. I wish it was a little longer; maybe there is more content you can add? It might also be worth trying to make the ending a bit smoother, maybe try to find a place in the interview where it feels more like a natural “end” to the conversation.

LIE Kenisha:

• I think in the beginning you should cut off that first bit and just start of with Sushi saying “I like to seize the moment…”
• Did she ever answer the question of what her favorite subject was??? Cos then people walked through and was like, “Bloopers!” and then Sushi started off by saying “I hated..” cut scene to “something something…”
• Towards the end it kind of got confusing and all over the place.
• I think you can work more on the lie video and make it longer too
• The ending parts was funny though because I got confused and Sushi also looked confused, but why did it end with her introducing herself?
• I like the part where Sushi is super confused and and kind of angrily says, “I don’t know.” LOL it’s funny
• It might help to add an intro and outdo to round off the video and make it feel more complete maybe?